tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21814787.post4041939026877966450..comments2023-09-11T05:07:08.496-07:00Comments on Poet This!: Must Be GhostsAgneshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01647973221532833038noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21814787.post-8883194950581454582009-05-19T09:21:00.000-07:002009-05-19T09:21:00.000-07:00Thanks, Paul.
LOL Ravi, you crack me up.Thanks, Paul.<br /><br />LOL Ravi, you crack me up.Agneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01647973221532833038noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21814787.post-39385126223296526052009-05-18T23:18:00.000-07:002009-05-18T23:18:00.000-07:00' cage of sun-bleached ribs ' is predictable - alm...<I>' cage of sun-bleached ribs '</I> is predictable - almost telly. The poem could do with some more surprises. Good one otherwise. I would also suggest hyphenating <I>' pink lips''</I>. Why <I>'crimson'</I> bird? I found <I>'wheel of sand'</I> beautiful. I will attribute a need for symmetry to it, otherwise I cannot understand the reason for the space between the last two lines.The Wholesome Satyrhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01496515009177680957noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-21814787.post-12195097724084502012009-05-18T21:47:00.000-07:002009-05-18T21:47:00.000-07:00That is brilliant. I think it is my favourite poem...That is brilliant. I think it is my favourite poem of yours I have read, full, alive, wonderful tone.Paulhttp://gingatao.com/noreply@blogger.com